Happy starting.

2017-09-22 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

I start this course for a long time. It is about in two years. This site(POWER ENGLISH) have many changes such as system. It is more convenient. I am looking forward improve my English skill. I shared small talk with teacher at first class. It was exciting. I will have class three times a week and do homework well. I choosed newspaper course so I have to read it(newspaper). It was not easy but I do it joyful. Thanks.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Anne! ^_^) Happy Friday!


Thank you for this composition.

I also enjoyed talking to you last Wednesday. ^^,

There were some slips but don\'t let those mistakes conquer your strength.

Keep applying in your daily life what you are learning everyday.
Every day do something that will inch you closer to a better tomorrow.^-^


Have a fun and safe weekend!

_Teacher Mayleen :)


I start this course for a long time.

>> I took this course a long time ago.


It is about in two years.

>> It was about two years ago.


This site(POWER ENGLISH) have many changes such as system.

>> The Power English site had many changes such as their system.


It is more convenient.

>> Correct!


I am looking forward improve my English skill.

>> I am looking forward to improving my English skills.


I shared small talk with teacher at first class.

>> I shared a conversation with the teacher during my first class.


It was exciting.

>> Correct!


I will have class three times a week and do homework well.

>> I will have class three times a week and I will do well in my homework.



I choosed newspaper course so I have to read it(newspaper).

>> I chose a newspaper course so I have to read some articles.


It was not easy but I do it joyful. Thanks.

>> It is not easy but I will do it joyfully. Thanks.

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