happy sunday/!
학생이 쓴 원문
hello~
how whether is in your contry today?
today, jeju has lots of windy. and the windy is yellow dust.
so i will not go out today.
finally, i will go to hongkong tomorrow.
i want to rest in there,!
see ya!
강사 첨삭
Great [이름]!
Enjoy, learn and relax while you are in Hongkong.
The weather is fine. Summer heat is felt.
Take care always!
Waiting for you,
T. Joanna
hello~
>>Hello!
how
whether is in your contry today?
>>How is the weather in your country today?
today,
jeju has lots of windy. and the windy is yellow dust.
>>It뭩 windy here in Jeju and it뭩 not just windy
because the wind is coupled with Yellow Dust.
so
i will not go out today.
>>So I decided not to go out today.
finally,
i will go to hongkong tomorrow.
>>Finally, I am going to Hongkong tomorrow.
i
want to rest in there,!
>>I want to take a rest there.
see
ya
>>See yah!
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