happy Sunday~! teacher.

2014-11-17 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1. The teacher asked us ___ we saw. what 2. Robert doesn't know ___ you are here. that 3. The neighbors said ___ our music was too loud. that 4. Do you know _____ her name is? what 5. I know __ she is from Italy. that 6. We realize ___ what we did was a mistake. that 7. I still don't understand ___ that book was about. what 8. Do you know ___ time it is? what 9. Didn't they tell you ___ to wear? what 10. He knows exactly ____ I'm talking about. what Teacher HI~! I couldn't submit my homework, because my computer was broken. but I can write my composition, I knew that it could be turned on when Its temperater is low. so I left it outdoor for a minute and then, It works again. Such a amazing thing. Anyway I'm happy to submit my homework now. I enjoyed weekand with Carolyn. Sitting on chair, we drank coffees and ate some snack in the cafe. We studied a lot for about four hours maybe..? Im very proud of my self now and I feel happy.

강사 첨삭

Good job, [이름]!
You got a perfect score! Yahoo!
Wow! That\'s really amazing.
How\'s the weather in your city? 
Keep yourself warm always.
I am glad that you spent time with Carolyn.
Tell me about it in class. 
Teacher Nina

1. The teacher asked us ___ we saw.

what
>> correct
2. Robert doesn\'t know ___ you are here.
that
>> correct
3. The neighbors said ___ our music was too loud.
that
>> correct
4. Do you know _____ her name is?
what
>> correct
5. I know __ she is from Italy.
that
>> correct
6. We realize ___ what we did was a mistake.
that
>> correct
7. I still don\'t understand ___ that book was about.
what
>> correct
8. Do you know ___ time it is?
what
>> correct
9. Didn\'t they tell you ___ to wear?
what
>> correct
10. He knows exactly ____ I\'m talking about.
what
>> correct

Teacher HI~!
>> Hi teacher. 
>> OR: Hi, Teacher.
I couldn\'t submit my homework, because my computer was broken.
>> correct
but I can write my composition, I knew that it could be turned on when Its temperater is low. 
>> But I can already write my composition. I knew that it could be turned on when the temperature is low. ( Please explain this sentence in class. ^^) 
>> OR: But I can already write my composition. I knew that I could turn it on when the device is not used for a long time. 
so I left it outdoor for a minute and then, It works again. 
>> correct
>> Better: So, I left it outside for a minute and the it works again. 
Such a amazing thing.
>> Such an amazing thing. 
Anyway I\'m happy to submit my homework now.
>> correct
I enjoyed weekand with Carolyn.
>> I enjoyed the weekend with Carolyn. 
Sitting on chair, we drank coffees and ate some snack in the cafe.
>> We sat on the a chair, drank coffee and ate some snacks in a cafe. 
We studied a lot for about four hours maybe..?
>> We studied a lot for about four hours.
>> OR: I think we studied a lot for four hours. 
Im very proud of my self now and I feel happy.
>> correct
>> I\'m very proud of myself now and I am happy. 

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