Happy Thursday :D

2011-02-17 · 첨삭 강사 lei

학생이 쓴 원문

Good afternoon, Lei. :) Thank you for calling again. I got up at 9 am and I ate rice, fried eggs and kimchi stew while listening to the music. The music is "I want to be a billionaire". As you told me ealier, It is a very funny song. But it is somehow a sad song. Because there isn't a chance that he win a lottery. Actually I prepared to sing this song for our promise. But I miss the timing. T.T Today, Korea's weather is cloudy and seems to rain. How is the weather over there? Anyway, Take care dear. See you tomorrow. =)

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!!! Good afternoon to you too. I forgot about your homework. I hope tomorrow you can sing that song to me. ^^ I agree that it is a funny song and I like it. Anyways take care okay and don't forget to bring your umbrella. I will see you tomorrow dear. Lei J   Good afternoon, Lei. :) >>correct Thank you for calling again. >>correct >>Thank you again for calling. I got up at 9 am and I ate rice, fried eggs and kimchi stew while listening to music. >>correct The music is "I want to be a billionaire". >>correct As you told me earlier, >>correct It is a very funny song. >>correct But it is somehow a sad song. >>correct Because there isn't a chance that he win a lottery. >>Because there's only a little chance that he will win the lottery. Actually I prepared to sing this song for our promise. >>Actually I prepared to sing this song during our class as I promised. But I miss the timing. T.T >>correct Today,Korea's weather is cloudy and seems to rain. >>Today's weather is cloudy and it seems to be raining. How is the weather over there? >>correct Anyway, Take care dear. See you tomorrow. =) >>correct

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