Happy Thursday :D
학생이 쓴 원문
Good afternoon, Lei. :)
Thank you for calling again.
I got up at 9 am and I ate rice, fried eggs and kimchi stew while listening to the music. The music is "I want to be a billionaire".
As you told me ealier, It is a very funny song.
But it is somehow a sad song.
Because there isn't a chance that he win a lottery.
Actually I prepared to sing this song for our promise.
But I miss the timing. T.T
Today,
Korea's weather is cloudy and seems to rain.
How is the weather over there?
Anyway, Take care dear. See you tomorrow. =)
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!! Good afternoon to you too. I forgot about your homework. I hope tomorrow you can sing that song to me. ^^ I agree that it is a funny song and I like it. Anyways take care okay and don't forget to bring your umbrella. I will see you tomorrow dear.
Lei J
Good afternoon, Lei. :)
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Thank you for calling again.
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>>Thank you again for calling.
I got up at 9 am and I ate rice, fried eggs and kimchi stew while listening to music.
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The music is "I want to be a billionaire".
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As you told me earlier,
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It is a very funny song.
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But it is somehow a sad song.
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Because there isn't a chance that he win a lottery.
>>Because there's only a little chance that he will win the lottery.
Actually I prepared to sing this song for our promise.
>>Actually I prepared to sing this song during our class as I promised.
But I miss the timing. T.T
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Today,Korea's weather is cloudy and seems to rain.
>>Today's weather is cloudy and it seems to be raining.
How is the weather over there?
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Anyway, Take care dear. See you tomorrow. =)
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