Happy Tuesday!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Kristine,
After i finished my class , i watched the video file. It was painful to me while i am listening.
I feel My pronounciation and my attitude looks awkward. But i believe i will be getting better in the future.
HOMEWORK FOR 01/16:
Writing Task: If you could only eat one food for the rest of your life, what would you choose?
I would like to choose the hard bread like that german usually eat for breakfast and gourmet cheese.
강사 첨삭
Hey, [이름]!
I also watched the video. Try not to be conscious when the class is recording. Just relax and share your thoughts and opinions freely during our conversation!
- Kristibe ^^
Hi Kristine,
After i finished my class , i watched the video file.
After i finished my class , i watched the video file.
>> I watched the video file after the class.
It was painful to me while i am listening.
>> It was painful for me while I was listening to it.
I feel My pronounciation and my attitude looks awkward.
I feel My pronounciation and my attitude looks awkward.
>> I feel my pronunciation and my attitude look awkward.
But i believe i will be getting better in the future.
>> However, I think I\'ll get better in the future.
HOMEWORK FOR 01/16:
Writing Task: If you could only eat one food for the rest of your life, what would you choose?
I would like to choose the hard bread like that german usually eat for breakfast and gourmet cheese.
HOMEWORK FOR 01/16:
Writing Task: If you could only eat one food for the rest of your life, what would you choose?
I would like to choose the hard bread like that german usually eat for breakfast and gourmet cheese.
>> I would like to choose the hard bread that Germans usually eat for breakfast and gourmet cheese.
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