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학생이 쓴 원문
-If you have multiple task, how will you manage your time?
I will set a priority to determine which is more important. The most important thing for me is the one that only I can manage or if the span of time for doing it is not enough. I will do this one first and I will ask help from my colleagues to finish other tasks. By doing so, I could finish all the tasks on time.
(This sentence bothers me(( Is it stil not clear? If so, can you give me your tips to set a priority?)
-relacation?
I willing to work abroad. I have experiences of studying abroad and working with Russian people. So I know the cultural differences between Korea and Russia. and It will make me more easier to adopt to the new environment and carry out my ability.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, April!^^
Thank you for clarifying some things regarding your homework.
First, why do these sentences bother you? Please tell me your ideas tomorrow when we talk.
Second, when it comes to multiple tasks, setting your priorities is the best way to finish all of them.
I will start doing the tasks that are almost done for me to be able to finish something.
Then, the next thing that I will work on is the project that has a plan to be executed and lastly,
the tasks that do not have any plans at all.
If you have further questions, let\'s talk about it tomorrow in class.
See you!
~~Teacher Erine~~
If you have multiple task, how will you manage your time?I will set a priority to determine which is more important.
>> Correct
The most important thing for me is the one that only I can manage or if the span of time for doing it is not enough.
>> Correct
I will do this one first and I will ask help from my colleagues to finish other tasks.
>> Correct
By doing so, I could finish all the tasks on time. >> Correct(This sentence bothers me(( Is it stil not clear? If so, can you give me your tips to set a priority?)>> These sentences bother me. Aren\'t they clear enough? If so, can you give me your tips to set a priority?-relacation?
>> relocation?I willing to work abroad.
>> I am willing to work abroad.
I have experiences of studying abroad and working with Russian people.
>> Correct
So I know the cultural differences between Korea and Russia.
>> Correct
and It will make me more easier to adopt to the new environment and carry out my ability.
>> It will be much easier for me to adopt to the new environment and carry out my responsibilities.
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