Happy Valentine's day!

Hi Lei. Happy Monday. :) I'm writing to confirm whether my composition is correct or not. I was short of sleep. I slept over at my friend's house in order that I took care of his dogs. Because he had to go to Seoul for visa's extension. Anyway the dogs barked loudly all night long. So, I was able to sleep. When I was young, I respected my dad. He and I have a similar personality. We are generous and cheerful. We enjoy meeting with acquaintance. Most importantly, my dad is more drunkard than me. We have the same gene. I went to Je Ju Island last summer vacation. There are famous stroll ways. It is called olleh. There are 8 stroll courses. My boyfriend and I went to 1 course of olleh. We're going to go every courses in the future. Have a sweet Valentine's day. :)

Hi [이름] dear!! Happy Valentines day too. Here are my corrections and kindly check on them. Have some sleep okay. I will talk to you again tomorrow.

Lei J

Hi Lei. Happy Monday. :)

>>correct

I'm writing to confirm whether my composition is correct or not.

>>correct

I was short of sleep.

>>correct

>>I lack of sleep. (better)

I slept over at my friend's house in order that I took care of his dogs.

>>I slept over my friend's house in order for me to take care of his dog.

Because he had to go to Seoul for visa's extension.

>>Because he had to go to Seoul for his Visa's extension.

Anyway the dogs barked loudly all night long.

>>correct

>>The dogs kept on barking the whole night.

So, I was able to sleep.

>>So I was not able to sleep.

When I was young, I respected my dad.

>>correct

He and I have a similar personality.

>>We both have similar personality.

We are generous and cheerful.

>>correct

We enjoy meeting with acquaintance.

>>We enjoy having new acquaintances.

Most importantly, my dad is more drunkard than me.

>>Most importantly, my dad is more of a drunkard than I am.

We have the same genes.

>>correct

I went to Je Ju Island last summer vacation.

>>correct

There are famous stroll ways.

>>correct

It is called olleh.

>>correct

There are 8 stroll courses.

>>correct

My boyfriend and I went to 1 course of olleh.

>>correct

We're going to go every courses in the future.

>>We're going to take the other courses in the future.

Have a sweet Valentine's day. :)

>>correct