HAPPY WEDNESDAY!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi!
I feel great today !
Because I got the highest score on the music test!
As I practiced playing the recorder everyday, I can do well.
So I'm very happy and I want to tell this good news to you.
When I was playing the recorder, I was so nervous that my hands trembled, haha.
Originally, everyday I have a class with you. But today isn't so it's a little bit awkward and I really miss you.
Instead, I'll try to write the composition.
Take care and have a good day !
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
That is such a good news, I’m sorry not to respond as early as last night,
I just saw your composition today. I think that will be a very good start for
the upcoming tests I believe that you can do it. I do miss you too; I hope I
can talk to you again upon finishing your exams.
You almost wrote your letter perfectly that I didn’t do many corrections.
See you!!!
Always take care,
Connie ^^
Hi!I feel great today !Because I got the highest score on the music test!
>> CorrectAs I practiced playing the recorder everyday, I can do well.
>> CorrectSo I'm very happy and I want to tell this good news to you.
>> CorrectWhen I was playing the recorder, I was so nervous that my hands trembled, haha.
>> Correct
Originally, everyday I have a class with you.
But today isn't so it's a little bit awkward and I really miss you.
>> Originally everyday, I’m having a class with you but today it isn’t s
o it’s a little bit awkward and I really miss you. Instead, I'll try to write the composition.
>> CorrectTake care and have a good day !
>> Correct
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