HAPPY WEDNESDAY!

2010-06-10 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi! I feel great today ! Because I got the highest score on the music test! As I practiced playing the recorder everyday, I can do well. So I'm very happy and I want to tell this good news to you. When I was playing the recorder, I was so nervous that my hands trembled, haha. Originally, everyday I have a class with you. But today isn't so it's a little bit awkward and I really miss you. Instead, I'll try to write the composition. Take care and have a good day !

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], That is such a good news, I’m sorry not to respond as early as last night, I just saw your composition today. I think that will be a very good start for  the upcoming tests I believe that you can do it. I do miss you too; I hope I  can talk to you again upon finishing your exams. You almost wrote your letter perfectly that I didn’t do many corrections. See you!!! Always take care, Connie  ^^   Hi!I feel great today !Because I got the highest score on the music test! >> CorrectAs I practiced playing the recorder everyday, I can do well. >> CorrectSo I'm very happy and I want to tell this good news to you. >> CorrectWhen I was playing the recorder, I was so nervous that my hands trembled, haha. >> Correct Originally, everyday I have a class with you. But today isn't so it's a little bit awkward and I really miss you. >> Originally everyday, I’m having a class with you but today it isn’t s o it’s a little bit awkward and I really miss you. Instead, I'll try to write the composition. >> CorrectTake care and have a good day ! >> Correct

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