Happy Wednesday!

2011-04-20 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Hello~ I really appreciate that you woke me up and you gave me energy So I'm full of energy I lack of sleep<-Isn't it correct? I slept later yesterday becuase I worried about my plan for future I'm preparing a letter of self introduction It is important to write that letter becuase competition is heavy for landing a job in Korea I wonder job market competition is acute over there I'd like to be a business manager and I want to be a global business marketer in around 10 years This is one of reasons I'm learning to speak English I believe I will be able to speak English fluently if you help me as now To do that,I need to speak English more expression so, I'm going to watch American movie or drama from now Ah~ today's weather is very clear like you I hope you are all the best:)

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 Hi there! Happy Wednesday my dear [이름]. Thank you again for your composition. I really appreciate all the efforts that you are giving to improve your English communication ability. I believe that you can achieve your goal through constant practice. Just be confident always. _T. Kelly I really appreciate that you woke me up and you gave me energy>> I really appreciate that you woke me up and gave me energy. So I'm full of energy >> Correct.I lack of sleep<-Isn't it correct? >> I lack sleep. >> I didn’t get much sleep.I slept later yesterday becuase I worried about my plan for future >> I slept late last night because I’m worried about my future plan.I'm preparing a letter of self introduction >> Correct.It is important to write that letter becuase competition is heavy for landing a job in Korea >> It is very important for me to prepare my self introduction letter because of the tough competition when applying for a job here in Korea..I wonder job market competition is acute over there >> I wonder how’s the competition in job market over there.I'd like to be a business manager and I want to be a global business marketer in around 10 years >> I’d like to become a business manager and global business marketer after 10 years.This is one of reasons I'm learning to speak English >> This is one of the reasons why I’m learning how to speak English.I believe I will be able to speak English fluently if you help me as now >> I believe that I will be able to speak English fluently if you will help me.To do that,I need to speak English more expression so, I'm going to watch American movie or drama from now >> To be able to achieve that, I need to use more English expressions, so I’m going to watch american movies from now on.  Ah~ today's weather is very clear like you >> Today’s weather is very nice just like you.I hope you are all the best:) >> I hope you all the best. >> I wish you all the best.

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