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2015-09-23 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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-What irritate you ? how you deal with it? I have one thing that irritates me. I'm irritated with selfish people. Because they only think of themselves. Two months ago, I gathered some people to study together. After all of them were gathered, something happened. As we were about to start studying, one member said that she can't study with us because she has other plan. So we couldn't start study and we needed to wait to find another person. It was really an irritating action for us. If I am in that situation again, I will remember that it happened already and I will prevent it from getting worse by thinking about other people. and I will build a harmonious relationship.

강사 첨삭

Wednesday morning, April!^^I proofread your answer and there were few sentences that I edited regarding your answer. If you have questions, feel free to ask me. Take care!^^ ~~Teacher Erine~~ What irritate you ? how you deal with it? >> What irritates you and how do you deal with it?I have one thing that irritates me. >> Correct. I\'m irritated with selfish people. >> Correct. Because they only think of themselves. >> Correct Two months ago, I gathered some people to study together. >>Correct After all of them were gathered, something happened. >> Correct As we were about to start studying, one member said that she can\'t study with us because she has other plan. >> As we were about to start studying, one member said that she couldn\'t study with us because she had another plan. So we couldn\'t start study and we needed to wait to find another person. It was really an irritating action for us. >> So we couldn\'t start studying and we needed to wait to find another person. It was really an irritating action for us. If I am in that situation again, I will remember that it happened already and I will prevent it from getting worse by thinking about other people. >> Correct and I will build a harmonious relationship. >> Correct

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