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2015-10-07 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

▶What are you like working in a team? When I was a university student, I participated in several team activities. so now I have about ten T-shirts that I got from those kinds of activities. Especially when I worked with Russian performance group in a team (or as a team member??), I felt really interesting. because even If our culture and language was totally different, I could communicate with them in a common language, and we could exchange our different culture. So I prefer working in a team than working alone, and when I work together, I can show my ability more. ▶What sort of person do you not like to work with? I don't like to work with a person who likes to make smaller group in a team. because this kind of person interrupts to make harmonious atmosphere. In this case I will try to make chances to gather all of the members together and I will make sure that they will not make a smaller group in a team. Also if I don't like this situation, I will work professionally.

강사 첨삭

Here we go with your homework, April. There are some things that I corrected and if you have further questions, ask them tomorrow in our class before we discuss an article from timescall. See you!^^ ~~Teacher Erine~~ ▶What are you like working in a team?When I was a university student, I participated in several team activities. >> Correct so now I have about ten T-shirts that I got from those kinds of activities. >> So now, I have about ten t-shirts that I got from those kinds of activities. Especially when I worked with Russian performance group in a team (or as a team member??), I felt really interesting. >> Especially when I became a member of a Russian performance group, I felt really interested. because even If our culture and language was totally different, I could communicate with them in a common language, and we could exchange our different culture. >> Even if our culture and language were totally different, I could communicate with them in a common language and we could exchange thoughts about our culture. So I prefer working in a team than working alone, and when I work together, I can show my ability more.>> So I prefer working in a team than working alone, since I can also show my ability when I work in a group.▶What sort of person do you not like to work with?I don\'t like to work with a person who likes to make smaller group in a team. >> I don\'t like to work with a person who likes to make smaller groups in a team. because this kind of person interrupts to make harmonious atmosphere. >> This kind of person interrupts the harmonious atmosphere in a group. In this case I will try to make chances to gather all of the members together and I will make sure that they will not make a smaller group in a team. >> Correct Also if I don\'t like this situation, I will work professionally. >> Correct

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