Happy weekend
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Hi there Debby :)
Everytime before I do a homework, I try to come up with ideas about grammars, words, etc. If there's some words that I don't know, I search for that meaning. Of course you can think that it's natural, but it is effort for me to learn English.
I will always try to leran! :D
Take care.
<Essay>
Did I say that? I took an umbrella stratched into a building. While I was thinking something, I couldn't think about the umbrella. It was really embrassing experience, beacause many people in the building was waching me when I came in with the umbrella stretched. I should have considered about it. :'(
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Hi there [이름]!^^
Happy Monday!
Like normal people, you are also forgetful!^^
Hahahahaha.. If you bring an umbrella in a building I truly think that people would stare.
When you do reading, try to write down the words first and finish the story or paragraph before going to
the dictionary to check it. Before doing that, try to guess the meaning of the word from the
sentence it came from. Compare your guess to the meaning in the dictionary.^^
That\'s more effort and a challenge for your brain cells to work more for you!^^
T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you:
Hi there Debby :)
>> CORRECTOR> Hello funny Debby^^Everytime before I do a homework, I try to come up with ideas about grammars, words, etc.
>> CORRECT
OR> I usually try to think about ideas with grammar and words before I start off with my homework.
If there\'s some words that I don\'t know, I search for that meaning.
>> If there are some words that I don\'t know, I search for that meaning.
Of course you can think that it\'s natural, but it is effort for me to learn English.>> CORRECT
OR> You are thinking that it\'s just a natural instinct to go to the Dictionary but for me it\'s an effort for my English.I will always try to leran! :D>> I will always try to learn. ^^Take care.>> CORRECT<Essay>Did I say that? I took an umbrella stratched into a building.
>> Did I tell you before that I took an open umbrella inside a building?
While I was thinking something, I couldn\'t think about the umbrella.
>> While I was thinking about something, I forgot about the umbrella.
It was really embrassing experience, beacause many people in the building was waching me when I came in with the umbrella stretched.
>> It was really an embrassing experience, because many people in the building were waching me when I came in with the umbrella stretched.
I should have considered about it. :\'(
>> CORRECT
OR> I should have thought about it!
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