Hard work.

2013-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Giselle

학생이 쓴 원문

I agree whith this quotation. But not 100%. Because I think hard working is very important. But being lucky is not trivial. It is also important in success. If I keep to work hard, I can catch the chance. But some people can't get the chance even they are hard worker. So they are in their poor life. I heard and see that kinds of peole. By the way, we don't know that the chance choose me or not. So we have to work hard first.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for sending in your homework. I agree with you. We have to work hard so that opportunities will come our way. But sometimes, we also have to do our best to choose the right opportunity so that our hard work will not be put to waste. ^^ Take care and see you in class!^^ ~Teacher Giselle~ I agree whith this quotation. But not 100%.>>Correct! [with]Because I think hard working is very important. >>I think that hard work is very important.But being lucky is not trivial. >>Correct!It is also important in success.>>Correct! [...to succeed.]If I keep to work hard, I can catch the chance.>>If I keep on working hard, I can catch the chance _. But some people can\'t get the chance even they are hard worker. >>But some people cannot get the chance even if they are working hard.So they are in their poor life. >>So they remain poor in their lives.I heard and see that kinds of peole.>>I saw and heard about these kinds of people.By the way, we don\'t know that the chance choose me or not. >>We don\'t know whether \"chance\" chooses me or not.So we have to work hard first. >>Correct!^^

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