Hard work, picturesque, target, incentive, passion
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Good day, [이름]nah!
You made sentences, congratulations!
I\'m very happy that you are doing your best in order to improve.
Keep it up!
-Teacher Shelly-
My two sons are always hardworking that is why their life already very successful.
>>My two sons are always hardworking, that is why they are very successful in life.
When I visited at Hawail it was picturesque islands.
>>> When I visited Hawaii, I saw that it was a picturesque island.
In Korea started 5G on Dec 1,government are targeting all area in the next year which is great news.
>>> In Korea 5G was launched last December 1, the government wanted to target all areas next year, which is a great news.
People have their passion as you know I love educational field, that is my passion.
>>> Correct!
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