hardest interview

2020-09-07 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

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The hardest interview was a recruit in Korean language teacher. It was volunteer work, but it wasn`t familiar. In addition, I needed some English. Rather, those who learned the basic steps needed more English. I was confident in Korean, so I think I was a little arrogant. I thought it was too easy and lacked preparation.

강사 첨삭

Hi Mrs. [Name]~ Thank you for diligently doing your homework. As always, you\'re doing a great job. See you in class later. 

Here are your corrections:

The hardest interview was a recruit in Korean language teacher.
>> The hardest interview I had was to become a Korean language teacher.

It was volunteer work, but it wasn`t familiar.
>> It was a voluntary work but I wasn\'t familiar with the work.

In addition, I needed some English.
>> In addition, I needed to speak in English.

Rather, those who learned the basic steps needed more English.
>> Rather, those who knows the basics needed more English.

I was confident in Korean, so I think I was a little arrogant.
>> I was confident in Korean language so I became a little arrogant.

I thought it was too easy and lacked preparation.
>> I thought it was easy but it wasn\'t. I lacked in preparation.

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