Hardest part
학생이 쓴 원문
For me, it is the speaking that is the hardest part in studying English. It is hard for me to fluently speaking due to my habit of considering lots of things during speaking. Furthermore, I have a complex about my voice so I don’t prefer speak even in my mother tongue. So, it is hard to improve my speaking skills. And I am ashamed with my pronunciation. It makes worse this problem. I wish I can overcome this complex as soon as possible.So I decided to do Power English which can help me to improve my speaking skill by telephone. I do enjoy that and wait the time with expectation, even though it makes me anxious. I hope I can get good a good score in IELTS test which will be taken on July.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sue! I love your honesty and thank you for telling me all these things. I believe you have already familiarized some English words and I know you can easily learn more here. I wish you can be more confident in yourself because you are unique and there is nothing wrong with your voice. It is lovely! See you!-Faith-
For me, it is the speaking that is the hardest part in studying English. >> CORRECT
OR For me, speaking is the most challenging part in studying English.
It is hard for me to fluently speaking due to my habit of considering lots of things during speaking.
>> It is hard for me to fluently speak due to my habit of considering lots of things while speaking.
Furthermore, I have a complex about my voice so I don’t prefer speak even in my mother tongue.
>> Furthermore, I have a complex about my voice so I don’t prefer speaking even in my mother tongue.
Furthermore, I have voice insecurity so I don’t prefer speaking even in my mother tongue.
So, it is hard to improve my speaking skills.
>> CORRECT
And I am ashamed with my pronunciation.
>> Also, I am ashamed of my pronunciation.
It makes worse this problem.
>> This makes the problem worse.
I wish I can overcome this complex as soon as possible.
>> CORRECT
So I decided to do Power English which can help me to improve my speaking skill by telephone.
>> So, I decided to learn from Power English which can help me to improve my speaking skill by telephone.
I do enjoy that and wait the time with expectation, even though it makes me anxious.
>> I do enjoy that and wait for the time with expectations even though it makes me anxious.
I hope I can get good a good score in IELTS test which will be taken on July.
>> I hope I can get good a good score in IELTS test which will be taken in July.
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