Has your appearance ever made you feel bad all day?
학생이 쓴 원문
Of course. My appearance once made me feel bad all day. Maybe almost everyone has that experience.
My face is oily and acne-prone.
So when I looked in the mirror, I felt bad all day when I had acne.
It\'s because makeup doesn\'t work well and I have to invest more time and cosmetics to cover my acne.
Also, when I saw my face in important situations, I often didn\'t like it.
For example, I\'m in a tense situation where I\'m having an interview, and when I look at my face in the mirror, I don\'t like everything from my face to makeup to my hair style.
No matter how much I thought it looked like that depending on the atmosphere or the state of my mind, the uncomfortable feeling continued.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!~
I can relate to your response as having apparent imperfections, particularly during a special event, makes us lose confidence. And honestly speaking, people judge you first based on your appearance... But I hope, people will give high importance to improving their inner beauty more than their outward appearance.
Chammy
Of course. My appearance once made me feel bad all day.
>>Of course, my appearance once made me feel bad all day.
Maybe almost everyone has that experience.
OR
>> Maybe the majority of the people feel the same way.
My face is oily and acne-prone.
So when I looked in the mirror, I felt bad all day when I had acne.
So when I looked in the mirror, I felt bad all day when I had acne.
It\'s because makeup doesn\'t work well and I have to invest more time and cosmetics to cover my acne.
Also, when I saw my face in important situations, I often didn\'t like it.
>>Correct
>>Correct
For example, I\'m in a tense situation where I\'m having an interview, and when I look at my face in the mirror, I don\'t like everything from my face to makeup to my hair style.
>> For example, I\'m in a tense situation at an interview, and when I look at my face in the mirror, I dislike everything about my face, cosmetics, and hairstyle.
No matter how much I thought it looked like that depending on the atmosphere or the state of my mind, the uncomfortable feeling continued.
>>Correct
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