Has your boss ever told you to do something unethical? Did you do it?
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No, he hasn\'t. My boss is an ethical person. When someone need to do something enethical, he would do it. Last year, A teacher want to buy our product. The teacher paid more money than the price of our product, and then he wanted to get a refund for the extra amount he paid.
It\'s illegal in Korea. We needed to make cash for the refund. At first, he agonized about doing it or not for a long time. Finally he decided to do it himself. I don\'t how did make the cash, but he did it. He is a man of strong responsibility.
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It\'s illegal in Korea. We needed to make cash for the refund.
- Teacher Angela
No, he hasn\'t. My boss is an ethical person.
>> CORRECT
When someone need to do something enethical, he would do it.
>> When someone needs to do something unethical, he would do it.
Last year, A teacher want to buy our product. The teacher paid more money than the price of our product, and then he wanted to get a refund for the extra amount he paid.
>> Last year, a teacher wanted to buy our product. The teacher paid more money than the price of our product and then requested a refund for the extra amount that he had paid.
>> It\'s illegal in Korea. We had to provide cash for the refund.
At first, he agonized about doing it or not for a long time.
>> At first, he agonized over whether to do it or not for a long time.
Finally he decided to do it himself.
>> Finally, he decided to do it himself.
I don\'t how did make the cash, but he did it. He is a man of strong responsibility.
>> I don\'t know how he made the cash, but he did it. He is a man of strong responsibility.
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