Has your hometown changed a lot since you were a kid? If so, how? Have the changes been for the bett
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Has your hometown changed a lot since you were a kid? If so, how? Have the changes been for the better or worse?
The old hometown where I used live ,when I was a kid.
Now it has been changed a lot.
High rise apartment building is built in that area. It is better than before.
When I got there, I am suprised a great development.
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Your hometown is the place which holds countless happy memories of your childhood and youth. At some point, many things will change. Some are good and some are bad.
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The old hometown where I used live ,when I was a kid.
>> The hometown, where I used when I was a kid, has changed a lot.
Now it has been changed a lot.
>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.
High rise apartment building is built in that area. It is better than before.
>> High rising apartment are built in that area. It is better than before.
When I got there, I am suprised a great development.
>> When I got there, I am surprised by the great development.
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