Has your hometown changed a lot since you were a kid? If so, how? Have the changes been for the bett
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I spent all my school days in one area and one house.
It gave me psychological stability.
My hometown remains almost unchanged.
So, sometimes when I go back to my hometown, it brings back a lot of old memories.
There are many memories in every alley of my hometown village.
When I was young, the alley was so big and long back then, but now it looks so small.
I feel strange.
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Hi Jennifer:)
Your hometown is the place which holds countless happy memories of your childhood and youth. At some point, many things will change. Some are good and some are bad.
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I spent all my school days in one area and one house.
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It gave me psychological stability.
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My hometown remains almost unchanged.
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So, sometimes when I go back to my hometown, it brings back a lot of old memories.
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There are many memories in every alley of my hometown village.
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When I was young, the alley was so big and long back then, but now it looks so small.
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I feel strange.
>> It feels strange.
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