Has your hometown changed a lot since you were a kid? If so, how? Have the changes been for the bett
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Actually, my hometown is the city where I am living now.
It is a neighbor city of Seoul city, so there are a lot of amenities since the city was built.
Planty of things were changed in the city, but those are just small things.
My hometown is a city, and there are a lot of amenities.
This fact didn\'t change and most fact about them are same as before.
Many friends talk about the change of their hometown.
And when I was a kid, I just envied it.
But now, I think it is very nice to ge my hometown as a city.
It doesn\'t change that much, and I think it is good for me.
Of course, there are a few problems of living in a city.
But I think we can figure them oust, and we should.
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Hi [이름]:)
Your hometown is the place which holds countless happy memories of your childhood and youth. At some point, many things will change. Some are good and some are bad.
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Actually, my hometown is the city where I am living now.
>> CORRECT
It is a neighbor city of Seoul city, so there are a lot of amenities since the city was built.
>> It is a neighbor city of Seoul so there are a lot of amenities since the city was built.
Planty of things were changed in the city, but those are just small things.
>> Plenty of things has changed in the city, but only minimal ones.
My hometown is a city, and there are a lot of amenities.
>> My hometown is a city that has a lot of amenities.
This fact didn\'t change and most fact about them are same as before.
>> This fact didn\'t change and is still the same as before.
Many friends talk about the change of their hometown.
>> Many friends talk about the changes in their hometown.
And when I was a kid, I just envied it.
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
But now, I think it is very nice to ge my hometown as a city.
>> But now, I think it is very nice to be in my hometown.
It doesn\'t change that much, and I think it is good for me.
>> It didn\'t change that much but I think it is good for me.
Of course, there are a few problems of living in a city.
>> Of course there are a few problems when we live in a city.
But I think we can figure them oust, and we should.
>> But I think we can figure them out.
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