Has your hometown changed a lot since you were a kid? If so, how? Have the changes been for the bett

2022-09-01 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

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When I was a kid, there wasn\'t a skyscraper in my hometown. It was more like a countryside than a city, and it was felt like peaceful. But now, there are a lot of skyscrapers and convenient facilities. It is more like a city than a countryside. Thanks for this, I can enjoy a lot of entertainments in my town. But sometimes I feel like stuffy, and it is hard to see a sky because of buildings.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!
Thanks for describing your town in detail. See you tomorrow! ^^
~~Teacher Kate 

When I was a kid, there wasn\'t a skyscraper in my hometown.
>>CORRECT! 
It was more like a countryside than a city, and it was felt like peaceful.
>>It was more like a countryside than a city, and it felt peaceful.
But now, there are a lot of skyscrapers and convenient facilities.
>>CORRECT! 
It is more like a city than a countryside.
>>CORRECT! 
Thanks for this, I can enjoy a lot of entertainments in my town.
>>Thanks to this, I can enjoy a lot of entertainment facilities in my town.
But sometimes I feel like stuffy, and it is hard to see a sky because of buildings.
>>But sometimes I feel stuffy, and it is hard to see the sky because of the buildings.

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