hat are you grateful for today?
학생이 쓴 원문
I am grateful for my life today, because our everyday life is not given to us for granted. In today\'s world, every day millions of people end their lives for various reasons. I think we should be grateful for every day of life.
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름] Ki! I\'m happy to hear that you are always grateful. There are many reasons to be grateful and happy. Stay happy and positive. We will talk more in class. I will see you then. Take care!~T. Lyn
I am grateful for my life today, because our everyday life is not given to us for granted.
>>I am granted and given the gift of life that\'s why I am thankful today and every day.
In today\'s world, every day millions of people end their lives for various reasons.
>>In today\'s world, millions of people die every day for a variety of reasons.
I think we should be grateful for every day of life.
>>I think we should be thankful and be grateful for everyday life.
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