hat holidays are you always excited about? Why?
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Yes, I like holidays.
It\'s because I like all the holidays and also because I like playing and when it\'s holiday I can play a lot as I want.
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~~ Teacher Sharon
Yes, I like holidays.
>> Correct
It\'s because I like all the holidays and also because I like playing and when it\'s holiday I can play a lot as I want.
It\'s because I like all the holidays and also because I like playing and when it\'s holiday I can play a lot as I want.
>> It\'s because I like all the holidays and also because I like playing and when it\'s a holiday, I can play as much as I want.
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