Hate crimes
학생이 쓴 원문
Whenever I heard the news of hate crimes in America, I am so astonoshed.
To surprise that Black people assait Asian indiscriminetely, especially for women.
Black seem to explode social anger at Asian.
They thought that they lost thrir money and jobs to Asian.
강사 첨삭
Good day Ms. [이름]! Thank you once again for expressing our thoughts in writing. I guess black people is diverting their anger to Asians. I hope hate-crimes will end soon.
~Aki :)
Whenever I heard the news of hate crimes in America, I am so astonoshed.
>>> Whenever I hear news of hate-crimes in America, I am so astonished.
To surprise that Black people assait Asian indiscriminetely, especially for women.
>>> To my surprise that Black people assault Asians indiscriminately especially women.
Black seem to explode social anger at Asian.
>> Black people seem to express their anger to Asians.
They thought that they lost thrir money and jobs to Asian.
>>> They thought that they lost their money and jobs to Asians.
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