Hate thing when I get home

2023-03-09 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

학생이 쓴 원문

I hate to do task from universitiy. Because my commute time to school takes almost 2 hours, so I want to take a rest in my home, but there are so many tasks which I have to [이름]ve. And l also hate to wash my face and take a shower. After arrive at my house, I\'m so tired and I want to take a nap, But It\'s so dirty to sleep with cloths with dust and other dirty things, So I take a shower everyday. But after taking a shower, I can\'t sleep because shower wakes me up. So I hate it very much.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름] [이름]!

Thanks so much for your obvious effort in writing this composition homework. I had fun reading about your ideas regarding the topic. The mistakes were only very [이름]or. I hope I can help you improve your writing too. Have a great day and see you in our next class! ^^

~~Teacher Kate

I hate to do task from universitiy.

>>I hate doing tasks from the university.
Because my commute time to school takes almost 2 hours, so I want to take a rest in my home, but there are so many tasks which I have to [이름]ve.

>>Because my commute time to school takes almost 2 hours, I just want to take a rest in my home, but there are so many tasks which I have to accomplish.
And l also hate to wash my face and take a shower.

>>CORRECT!
After arrive at my house, I\'m so tired and I want to take a nap, But It\'s so dirty to sleep with cloths with dust and other dirty things, So I take a shower everyday.

>>After arriving home, I\'m so tired and want to take a nap but it\'s so uncomfortable to sleep in dirty and dusty cloths. So I take a shower everyday.
But after taking a shower, I can\'t sleep because shower wakes me up. So I hate it very much.

>>But after taking a shower, I can\'t sleep because the shower wakes me up. So I hate it very much.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기