Have a~~

2011-02-14 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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Have a nice day~~[이름]'s teacher Conne.. I'm [이름]'s younger sister. I wanted to she has a confidence. so I had a application. She though didn't wash .. She trying to last week that interesting.. Thank you so much~~~

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]'s younger sister!

Nice to hear from you! ^^

I hope we would have a good relationship too!

Take care!^-^

_Connie_

 

Have a~~

>>Have a Nice Day~~

Have a nice day~~[이름]'s teacher Conne..

>>Have a nice day, [이름]'s teacher Connie..
I'm [이름]'s younger sister.

>>Correct!^^
I wanted to she has a confidence. so I had a application.

>>I wanted that she'll have confidence so I had an application.
She though didn't wash ..

>>She didn't wash though.
She trying to last week that interesting..

>>She was trying to do it last week and that was interesting...
Thank you so much~~~

>>Correct!^^

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