Have a~~
학생이 쓴 원문
Have a nice day~~[이름]'s teacher Conne..
I'm [이름]'s younger sister.
I wanted to she has a confidence.
so I had a application.
She though didn't wash ..
She trying to last week that interesting..
Thank you so much~~~
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]'s younger sister!
Nice to hear from you! ^^
I hope we would have a good relationship too!
Take care!^-^
_Connie_
Have a~~
>>Have a Nice Day~~
Have a nice day~~[이름]'s teacher Conne..
>>Have a nice day, [이름]'s teacher Connie..
I'm [이름]'s younger sister.
>>Correct!^^
I wanted to she has a confidence. so I had a application.
>>I wanted that she'll have confidence so I had an application.
She though didn't wash ..
>>She didn't wash though.
She trying to last week that interesting..
>>She was trying to do it last week and that was interesting...
Thank you so much~~~
>>Correct!^^
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