Have a dinner with aunt
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I had a dinner with my aunt.I ated pork and noodles.Before eating dinner,I saw a dentist.I thought it was my second time to pull out.But it is not.The dentist said see a dentist when the tooth is more shaking.I am writing diary now because I forget it.
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Hi, [이름]!
You are a brave boy because you\'re not afraid to see a dentist. ^^
Well, take care of yourself especially after pulling out your tooth.
Good luck with your studies my dear.
See you on Tuesday!
Have a great weekend!
_Teacher Dianne
I had a dinner with my aunt.I ated pork and noodles.
>> I had a dinner with my aunt and I ate pork and noodles.
Before eating dinner,I saw a dentist.
>> I saw or visited a dentist before eating dinner.
>> Or: I went to a dentist before eating dinner.
I thought it was my second time to pull out.But it is not.
>> I thought it was my second time to pull out my tooth, but it is not.
The dentist said see a dentist when the tooth is more shaking.
>> The dentist told me to see a dentist when my tooth is shaking more.
I am writing diary now because I forget it.
>> I am writing diary now because I forgot it.
>> Or: I am writing diary now because I forgot it after our class on Tuesday.
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