Have a dinner with aunt

2016-10-06 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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I had a dinner with my aunt.I ated pork and noodles.Before eating dinner,I saw a dentist.I thought it was my second time to pull out.But it is not.The dentist said see a dentist when the tooth is more shaking.I am writing diary now because I forget it.

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Hi, [이름]!   You are a brave boy because you\'re not afraid to see a dentist. ^^ Well, take care of yourself especially after pulling out your tooth. Good luck with your studies my dear. See you on Tuesday! Have a great weekend!   _Teacher Dianne   I had a dinner with my aunt.I ated pork and noodles. >> I had a dinner with my aunt and I ate pork and noodles. Before eating dinner,I saw a dentist. >> I saw or visited a dentist before eating dinner. >> Or: I went to a dentist before eating dinner. I thought it was my second time to pull out.But it is not. >> I thought it was my second time to pull out my tooth, but it is not. The dentist said see a dentist when the tooth is more shaking. >> The dentist told me to see a dentist when my tooth is shaking more. I am writing diary now because I forget it. >> I am writing diary now because I forgot it. >> Or: I am writing diary now because I forgot it after our class on Tuesday.

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