Have a fruitful weekends!

2014-04-28 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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I'm writing it to finalize today! today is satuday. Today, first I stayed in my bed by 10:00 a.m. (I slept in by 10:00 a.m.) I said to Katherine that I always study even weekends. but i didn't do that today.. After having lunch with my family at our place we all watched the movie named "Lone Survivor". It recorded 1st of The Box office in America. It's based on true story. I think I was worth seeing! but my father said that It was not good than expected. Anyway, We spent Good time having family time all day. well..I cut all my hair myself an hour ago. It's so cool. kkkk.. Finishing this writing, I'm going to study some English words a little until i go to bed. because I overslept today, I guess that i couldn't sleep tonight. I can't wait to have a class with my tutor Katherine on Monday! I'm just wondering that Are you having fruitful weekends? I hope you're having good time.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Conner!

How are you?
I hope you are feeling good at this time.
Anyway, I\'m so sorry that I did not check your composition right ahead.
I  did not open my page.

I actually do not open my page during the weekend because I want to take a break.

It is my free time so I wanted to enjoy my time.
Anyway, I hope you would understand.
See you later!


Always,
Kathrine ^^


I\'m writing it to finalize today!

>> I\'m writing this to be finalized today.

today is satuday.

>>  Today is Saturday.
 Today, first I stayed in my bed by 10:00 a.m.

>>  Today, I stayed on bed until 10 am.
 (I slept in by 10:00 a.m.)

>>  I slept until 10 am.
 I said to Katherine that I always study even weekends.

>>  I said to Katherine that I am always studying even at the weekends.
 but i didn\'t do that today..

>>  correct! (capitalization)
 After having lunch with my family at our place we all watched the movie named \"Lone Survivor\".

>>  correct! 

>> or: After having lunch with my family at home, we all watched the movie entitled \"Lone Survivor.\"
 It recorded 1st of The Box office in America.

>>  It was recorded as the number 1 Box Office in America.

It\'s based on true story.

>>  It is based on a true story.
 I think I was worth seeing! 

>>  I think it was worth watching it.
 but my father said that It was not good than expected.

>>  But my father thinks that it was not good as what he is expecting.
 Anyway, We spent Good time having family time all day.

>>  Anyway, I have spent a good time with my family all day.
 well..I cut all my hair myself an hour ago.

>>   Well, I cut all my hair by myself an hour ago.

It\'s so cool. kkkk..

>>  correct!
 Finishing this writing, I\'m going to study some English words a little until i go to bed. 

>> After I finish writing this, I\'m going to  study some English words until I go to bed.
 because I overslept today, I guess that i couldn\'t sleep tonight.

>> correct!
 I can\'t wait to have a class with my tutor Katherine on Monday!

>> correct!
 I\'m just wondering that Are you having fruitful weekends?

>> I am just wondering, \"Are you having a fruitful weekend?
 I hope you\'re having good time.

>> I hope that you are having a good time.

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