Have a fruitful weekends!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there Conner!
How are you?
I hope you are feeling good at this time.
Anyway, I\'m so sorry that I did not check your composition right ahead.
I did not open my page.
I actually do not open my page during the weekend because I want to take a break.
It is my free time so I wanted to enjoy my time.
Anyway, I hope you would understand.
See you later!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
I\'m writing it to finalize today!
>> I\'m writing this to be finalized today.
today is satuday.
>> Today is Saturday.
Today, first I stayed in my bed by 10:00 a.m.
>> Today, I stayed on bed until 10 am.
(I slept in by 10:00 a.m.)
>> I slept until 10 am.
I said to Katherine that I always study even weekends.
>> I said to Katherine that I am always studying even at the weekends.
but i didn\'t do that today..
>> correct! (capitalization)
After having lunch with my family at our place we all watched the movie named \"Lone Survivor\".
>> correct!
>> or: After having lunch with my family at home, we all watched the movie entitled \"Lone Survivor.\"
It recorded 1st of The Box office in America.
>> It was recorded as the number 1 Box Office in America.
It\'s based on true story.
>> It is based on a true story.
I think I was worth seeing!
>> I think it was worth watching it.
but my father said that It was not good than expected.
>> But my father thinks that it was not good as what he is expecting.
Anyway, We spent Good time having family time all day.
>> Anyway, I have spent a good time with my family all day.
well..I cut all my hair myself an hour ago.
>> Well, I cut all my hair by myself an hour ago.
It\'s so cool. kkkk..
>> correct!
Finishing this writing, I\'m going to study some English words a little until i go to bed.
>> After I finish writing this, I\'m going to study some English words until I go to bed.
because I overslept today, I guess that i couldn\'t sleep tonight.
>> correct!
I can\'t wait to have a class with my tutor Katherine on Monday!
>> correct!
I\'m just wondering that Are you having fruitful weekends?
>> I am just wondering, \"Are you having a fruitful weekend?
I hope you\'re having good time.
>> I hope that you are having a good time.
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