Have a good holiday in your hometown!
학생이 쓴 원문
This is today's homework.
If I keep your promise, I am forcing my way through people.
Otherwise, I will not keep a promise with you.
I covet the most to travel around the world.
For that, I need more money and more time.
The day after tomorrow is Lunar new year's day.
We have 3 national holidays.
How about your country?
I heard that you will stay your hometown for holiday.
Where is your hometown.
It dosen't look like Baguio.
Have a good holiday in your hometown!
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!
Our country is using Solar calendar so basically, we don’t have Lunar New Year but since many Chinese live in our country, we also celebrate this special event with them.
Our country has a lot of National holidays and I really mean a lot maybe because our country’s tradition is a festivity type that’s why we have many holidays.
My hometown is a small town near Baguio City. It takes about one and half hour to get there and the name is Manaoag.
I also wish you a happy holiday with your family!
See you on Tuesday!!
T. Shy
If I keep your promise, I am forcing my way through people.>> If I keep my promise, I will be forcing my way through people.
Otherwise, I will not keep a promise with you.>> Otherwise, I will not keep a promise to you.
I heard that you will stay your hometown for holiday.>> I heard that you will stay in your hometown for the holiday.
Where is your hometown.>> Where is your hometown?
It dosen't look like Baguio.>> It doesn’t sound like Baguio.
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