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2019-03-27 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

27th. Mar. 2019. Sometimes I want to watch the program on the Youtube but It\'s is very wasteful becuase I have to study English everyday in order to study speaking in English more. And then, I want to take a nap all day but if I take a nap all day, I can\'t hang out with my friends and study English. after all, I have to study English and pass the IELTS band 6.5

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

I want you to focus on your sentence patterns and punctuation.

There are simple rules that you have to follow when writing.

It\'s important if you\'re going to take the IELTS test.

Examiners are very strict in this area.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

Sometimes I want to watch the program on the Youtube but It\'s is very wasteful becuase I have to study English everyday
>> Sometimes, I just want to watch YouTube videos but they are a waste of time because I have to study English every day.
in order to study speaking in English more.
>> This is to improve my English skills.
And then, I want to take a nap all day but if I take a nap all day, I can\'t hang out with my friends and study English.
>> I also want to take naps during the day but if I do that, I won\'t be able to hang out with my friends and study English.
after all, I have to study English and pass the IELTS band 6.5

>> After all, I have to study English and pass the IELTS with a band score of 6.5.

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