have a great weekend.

2010-03-26 · 첨삭 강사 1011

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Dear lei. Today, i had a sudden meeting at 12:45. So we couldn't share enough conversation . I'm sorry about it. did you make you're weekend plan? for me, on Saturday. i will go to Busan. Busan is the second large city in Korea. I've underwent a operation last month. it is lasik operation.Due to i had a bad eyesight i needed it. after surgery i need to take regular checkup. for it i will visit the hospital tomorrow. and also i will go there with my friend who want to have a shopping in Busan. In Busan, there are many places to enjoy shopping. I guess it will be fantastic day for us. Have a great weekend, Lei~

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Dear lei. >> correct!   Today, i had a sudden meeting at 12:45. >> Today, I had a sudden meeting at 12:45.   So we couldn't share enough conversation. >> That’s why we did not have enough time to talk.   I'm sorry about it. >> I’m sorry about that.   did you make you're weekend plan? >> Did you accomplish your weekend plan?   for me, on Saturday. i will go to Busan. >> As for me, my plan this Saturday is to visit Busan.   Busan is the second large city in Korea. >> Busan is the second largest city in Korea.   I've underwent a operation last month. >> I undergone an operation last month.   it is lasik operation. >> It was a Lasik operation.   Due to i had a bad eyesight i needed it. >> I had a bad condition in my eyesight that’s why I went through the surgery.   after surgery i need to take regular checkup. >> After the surgery I was required to a have regular checkups.   for it i will visit the hospital tomorrow. and also i will go there with my friend who want to have a shopping in Busan.. >> That’s why I need to go and visit the hospital tomorrow and together with my friend we will be traveling to Busan because she wants to go shopping there.   In Busan, there are many places to enjoy shopping. >> In Busan, there are many places to choose from to go shopping.   I guess it will be fantastic day for us. >> correct!   Have a great weekend, Lei~ >> correct!

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