have a nice day!!
학생이 쓴 원문
How’s it going? I hope your everything is doing well.
According to your mail, you are on the way to adapt to new lifestyle (is it new?) but there's something blocks you from feeling the reality that you are in Japan already. I think that is natural because you were almost an Iloilo citizen. Don’t you think so? Anyway, it is good you returned in Japan without any accident. I think you did everything successfully, yet how can you think still you are a coward? Don’t say like that. I might say you just don’t like to face a terrible situation (who likes this?) and you just express your way of preference like something makes you feel bad and disgust such as blood. So it is difficult to say you are a coward, even you did many things that you explored new places and experienced diverse activity by yourself. Moreover, you mentioned that you will work at top of the mountain. You are brave! That’s why you could decide to throw away your flight ticket.
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
Thank you very much for your composition. I love how you view bravery. Well, for me, I think every person has his own strengths. He/she just have to believe that he/she can succeed. Trusting yourself might be difficult, but it can make you a better, a stronger person. Anyway, take care! Have a happy Monday!
How’s it going?
>> Correct.
>> How is it going?
I hope your everything is doing well.
>> I hope everything\'s going well with you.According to your mail, you are on the way to adapt to new lifestyle (is it new?) but there\'s something blocks you from feeling the reality that you are in Japan already.
>> According to your mail, you are on the way to adapt to a new lifestyle (is it new?) but there\'s something blocking you from feeling the reality that you are already in Japan.
I think that is natural because you were almost an Iloilo citizen.
>> Correct. (We\'ll have to discuss this in class for a better correction.)
Don’t you think so?
>> Correct.
>> Don\'t you think so?
Anyway, it is good you returned in Japan without any accident.
>> Anyway, it is good you returned to Japan without any accidents.
>> Anyway, it is good you arrived in Japan safely.
I think you did everything successfully, yet how can you think still you are a coward?
>> I think you did everything successfully, yet, how could you still think you are a coward?
Don’t say like that.
>> Correct.
>> Don\'t say that.
I might say you just don’t like to face a terrible situation (who likes this?) and you just express your way of preference like something makes you feel bad and disgust such as blood.
>> I might say you just don\'t like to face a terrible situation (who likes this?), and you just express your way of preference (like something makes you feel bad and something disgusting like blood).
So it is difficult to say you are a coward, even you did many things that you explored new places and experienced diverse activity by yourself.
>> So it is difficult to say you are a coward because you did many things by exploring new places and did diverse things by yourself.
Moreover, you mentioned that you will work at top of the mountain.
>> Correct.
You are brave!
>> Correct.
That’s why you could decide to throw away your flight ticket.>> Now, you can decide whether to throw away your flight ticket or not.
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