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Q2: Please tell me what you think a job is
Sure, I think a job is very important in my life.
If i have a job I could enjoy more happy and comfortable.
Actually It is not important money for me,
The most imprtant that how can I live enjoy that.
In other words I should chose my job which is eager to do and I could be hard worker.
For these reasons I want to be a flight attendant due to enjoying my life.
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Hi there gorgeous , stunning [이름]!!!! I hope you are enjoying your Monday evening!
Take care and I'll catch up with you later. ^^.
~ T. Christine ~ >_<
Q2: Please tell me what you think a job is?>> Correct!Sure, I think a job is very important in my life.
>> Correct!
>> Sure, I think having a job is very important in a person's life.If i have a job I could enjoy more happy and comfortable.>> If I have a job I can enjoy a more happier and comfortable life.
Actually It is not important money for me,>> Actually, money is not that important to me.
The most imprtant that how can I live enjoy that. >> I think, how I can enjoy my work is more important.
In other words I should chose my job which is eager to do and I could be hard worker.>> In other words, I should choose a job which I am very passionate about and I am willing to work hard for.
For these reasons I want to be a flight attendant due to enjoying my life.
>> For these reasons, I want to be a flight attendant because I know I am very passionate about it.
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