Have a nice weekend

2012-02-10 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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Hi, Michelle. Hi John, I arrived in ___x__ USA last Monday. We left __the___ Rome, flew over ___the__ Alps and made a quick stop in __x___ London. There we went shopping in ___x__ Harrods, visited ___x__Tower and enjoyed a sunny afternoon in ___x__ Hyde Park. On the following day we left for __x___ New York. __The___ time on board wasn't boring as there were two films to watch on __x___ monitor. ___the__ people on ___x__ plane were all ___x__ Italian. Before we landed at __the___ JFK airport, we saw ___x__ Statue of Liberty, __the___ Ellis Island and ___the__ Empire State Building. hotel I stayed in was on ___the__ corner of __x___ 42nd Street and __x___ 5th Avenue. I don't like __the___ hotels very much, but I didn't have __x___ time to rent an apartment. Please say hello to Peter and Mandy. Yours, [이름]

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Hi there, Thanks for sending me your homework. I really appreciate your effort in doing it. Happy Friday! Enjoy the weekend!   Hi, Michelle. >>CorrectHi John, >>CorrectI arrived in ___x__ USA last Monday. >>Correct  We left __the___ Rome, flew over ___the__ Alps and made a quick stop in __x___ London. >>We left x Rome, flew over the Alps and made a quick stop in x London. There we went shopping in ___x__ Harrods, visited ___x__Tower and enjoyed a sunny afternoon in ___x__ Hyde Park. >>Correct  On the following day we left for __x___ New York. Correct  __The___ time on board wasn\'t boring as there were two films to watch on __x___ monitor. >>The time on board wasn\'t boring as there were two films to watch on the monitor.  ___the__ people on ___x__ plane were all ___x__ Italian. >>The people on the plane were all x Italian. Before we landed at __the___ JFK airport, we saw ___x__ Statue of Liberty, __the___ Ellis Island and ___the__ Empire State Building. >>Before we landed at x JFK airport, we saw the Statue of Liberty, x Ellis Island and the Empire State Building.  hotel I stayed in was on ___the__ corner of __x___ 42nd Street and __x___ 5th Avenue. >>The hotel I stayed in was on the corner of x 42nd Street and x 5th Avenue.  I don\'t like __the___ hotels very much, but I didn\'t have __x___ time to rent an apartment. >>but I didn\'t have x time to rent an apartment.Please say hello to Peter and Mandy. >>CorrectYours,Peter >>Correct  

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