Have a nice weekend
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Hi, Michelle.
Hi John,
I arrived in ___x__ USA last Monday. We left __the___ Rome, flew over ___the__ Alps and made a quick stop in __x___ London. There we went shopping in ___x__ Harrods, visited ___x__Tower and enjoyed a sunny afternoon in ___x__ Hyde Park. On the following day we left for __x___ New York. __The___ time on board wasn't boring as there were two films to watch on __x___ monitor. ___the__ people on ___x__ plane were all ___x__ Italian. Before we landed at __the___ JFK airport, we saw ___x__ Statue of Liberty, __the___ Ellis Island and ___the__ Empire State Building. hotel I stayed in was on ___the__ corner of __x___ 42nd Street and __x___ 5th Avenue. I don't like __the___ hotels very much, but I didn't have __x___ time to rent an apartment.
Please say hello to Peter and Mandy.
Yours,
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Hi there,
Thanks for sending me your homework. I really appreciate your effort in doing it.
Happy Friday! Enjoy the weekend!
Hi, Michelle. >>CorrectHi John,
>>CorrectI arrived in ___x__ USA last Monday.
>>Correct
We left __the___ Rome, flew over ___the__ Alps and made a quick stop in __x___ London.
>>We left x Rome, flew over the Alps and made a quick stop in x London.
There we went shopping in ___x__ Harrods, visited ___x__Tower and enjoyed a sunny afternoon in ___x__ Hyde Park.
>>Correct
On the following day we left for __x___ New York.
Correct
__The___ time on board wasn\'t boring as there were two films to watch on __x___ monitor.
>>The time on board wasn\'t boring as there were two films to watch on the monitor.
___the__ people on ___x__ plane were all ___x__ Italian.
>>The people on the plane were all x Italian.
Before we landed at __the___ JFK airport, we saw ___x__ Statue of Liberty, __the___ Ellis Island and ___the__ Empire State Building.
>>Before we landed at x JFK airport, we saw the Statue of Liberty, x Ellis Island and the Empire State Building.
hotel I stayed in was on ___the__ corner of __x___ 42nd Street and __x___ 5th Avenue.
>>The hotel I stayed in was on the corner of x 42nd Street and x 5th Avenue.
I don\'t like __the___ hotels very much, but I didn\'t have __x___ time to rent an apartment.
>>but I didn\'t have x time to rent an apartment.Please say hello to Peter and Mandy.
>>CorrectYours,Peter
>>Correct
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