HAVE A NICE WEEKEND~~~~~

2010-09-17 · 첨삭 강사 lina

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My husbund like drink but he don't often drink He can drink about two bottle of soju We like to drink waching the TV Korean like to eat chinken and beer watching the soccer game I did it too last world cup This cooktail has a fruit taste My mother lives in same apartment me MY grandmother house nearby my house lina~~~have a good weekened see you next monday~ I'll wait for your call

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Hello Ms.[이름] [이름].It's really nice to have a conversation with you.You are right most men like to eat chicken,drink beer in front of the TV.Thank you very much for wishing me a good weekend.Hope you will have an amazing weekend too.SMILE   LINA My husbund like drink but he don't often drink >>My husband likes to drink but he doesn't often drink.He can drink about two bottle of soju >>CorrectWe like to drink waching the TV >>He likes to drink while watching TV.Korean like to eat chinken and beer watching the soccer game >>Korean likes to eat chicken and drink beer while watching soccer game.I did it too last world cup >>CorrectThis cooktail has a fruit taste >>This cocktail has a fruit taste.My mother lives in same apartment me >>My mother lives in the same apartment of me.MY grandmother house nearby my house >>My grandmother's house is nearby my house.lina~~~have a good weekened >>Correctsee you next monday~ >>CorrectI'll wait for your call >>Correct  

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