Have a nice weekend!

Hi, Marie! Did you have a nice lunch? I ate lunch at staff-cafeteria. Tomorrow is weekend. I will go to Jeon-ju in this evening. Tomorrow is my husbands birthday. I plan picnic next day. but I am concerned air pollution because my daughter is very young, and radioactivity accident happened in Japan. Anyway, I will be happy time with my family. Bye.

Hello there Ms. [이름],        Thank you for this composition. I notice that as time goes by you are improving in your writing. Take! See you on Monday. Happy weekend! -Marie-   Hi, Marie! >>CorrectDid you have a nice lunch? >>CorrectI ate lunch at the staff-cafeteria. >>CorrectTomorrow is weekend. >>CorrectI will go to Jeon-ju in this evening. >>I will go to Jeon-ju this evening. >>I will go to Jeon-ju tonight.Tomorrow is my husband's birthday. >>CorrectI plan picnic next day. >>I plan to have picnic next day.but I am concerned air pollution because my daughter is very young, and radioactivity accident happened in Japan. >>But I am concerned because of air pollution, my daughter is very young and radioactivity accident happened in Japan.Anyway, I will be happy time with my family. >>Anyway, I will have a happy time with my family. Bye. >>Correct