HAVE A NICE WEEKEND,T. JEHANN

2012-09-22 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear.Teacher Jehann Hellow, Jehann~!! Happy Friday~!! I'm sorry for the delay today's class. I'm going to visit my friend who had a second baby today.^-^ So I will bring her presents for her baby boy. I want to talk with you. I completely lose track of time when we take the class. You are a good teacher and friend for me. Thank you for your patience and friendly. Have a great weekend^-^ - from. [이름] ;D-

강사 첨삭

Hey there [이름]! Thank you for your letter. Happy Friday to you too. I hope you have a great time with your friend who now has two children.Hahaha.And you on the other hand, still don\'t have a husband..hahahha..I\'m kidding [이름], I don\'t mean to offend you. I want to make you smile or better, laugh! Anyway, thank you for your thoughtfulness. I really appreciate it. Take care and have a great weekend. ----T. Jehann------   Dear.Teacher Jehann >>>Dear Teacher Jehann,Hellow, Jehann~!! >>>Hello, Jehann!Happy Friday~!! >>>CORRECT!I\'m sorry for the delay today\'s class. >>>I\'m sorry for delaying our class for today.I\'m going to visit my friend who had a second baby today.^-^ >>>CORRECT!So I will bring her presents for her baby boy. >>>CORRECT! >>>OR So I will bring her some presents for her baby boy.I want to talk with you. >>>CORRECT! >>>I wanted to talk to you.  I completely lose track of time when we take the class. >>>I completely lose track of time when we have our class.You are a good teacher and friend for me. >>>You are a good teacher and a friend to me. Thank you for your patience and friendly. >>>Thank you for being patient and friendly.Have a great weekend^-^ >>>CORRECT!- from. [이름] ;D- >>>CORRECT!

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