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He was chubby, slightly bald with crooked teeth, obviously very nervous. And he stammered when he spoke. It was natural few people would take him seriously when he walked on the show stage. As he said he was going to sing an opera, the disdain was more obvious. We could see the judge's facial expressions which were likely to say "What an idiot." or "Who do you think you are." But their scorn toward him disappeared at once as he started to sing a song. His tremendous performance was certainly not as dopy as he looked. Yes. It was amazing. I was watching, gasping, and weeping. Thunderous applause broke out from audience. Overlapping with his past sad story, I thought it was like Cinderella stories.

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He was chubby, slightly bald with crooked teeth, obviously very nervous.

And he stammered when he spoke.

>> He was chubby, slightly bald with crooked teeth, obviously very nervous and he stammered when he spoke.

It was natural few people would take him seriously when he walked on the show stage.

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As he said he was going to sing an opera, the disdain was more obvious.

>>When he said he was gonna sing opera, the disdained look from the audience became worst.

We could see the judge's facial expressions which were likely to say "What an idiot." or "Who do you think you are."

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