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The backup plan or alternative option when I face the obstacles brings me comfort and effectiveness of implementation.
>>Having a backup plan or alternative options when I face obstacles brings me comfort and enhances the effectiveness of implementation.
I tend to work like that I draw two or three items, and then suggest them to my superior rather than execute an item that I think the best.
>>I tend to work by creating two or three different solutions and then suggesting them to my superiors rather than immediately executing what I believe is the best option.
If I work in this way, I can save my time and effort to do another work and can be regarded as a strategic person who prepare a number of cases.
>>If I work this way, I can save my time and effort to do another work and can be regarded as a strategic person who prepare a number of cases.
There are some cases like closure of the restaurant that I want to go, or cancellation of plane ticket because of weather in everyday life.
>>This approach is also valuable in everyday life, such as when dealing with situations like the closure of a restaurant I want to visit or the cancellation of a plane ticket due to bad weather.
I think that preparation of backup plan or alternative option before is really important to deal with a variable.
>>I believe that preparing a backup plan or alternative options in advance is truly important for handling uncertainties and variables effectively.
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