Have gun at home is very dangerous.
학생이 쓴 원문
I think have gun at home is very dangerous.
cause gun is very dangerous deadly weapon.
some people said, \" gun is protect to my family from robber\"
I agree too. but Gun is used to other use many area.
so some people was die.
have an anesthetic gun is right to protect to me from rubber.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ari! ^^ Yes, guns everywhere are dangerous. Anyone can be affected by firearm violence but in certain situations gun violence disproportionately impacts communities of color, women and other marginalized groups in society. :(
TEACHER GEMMA
I think have gun at home is very dangerous.>>> I think having guns at home is very dangerous.
cause gun is very dangerous deadly weapon.
cause gun is very dangerous deadly weapon.
>>> Gun is a very dangerous deadly weapon.
some people said, \" gun is protect to my family from robber\"
some people said, \" gun is protect to my family from robber\"
>>> some people said, \" Having a gun is a protection of the family from thieves.\"
I agree too. but Gun is used to other use many area.
I agree too. but Gun is used to other use many area.
>>> I also agree with it but gun could be used to harm others.
so some people was die.
so some people was die.
>>> So some people die.
have an anesthetic gun is right to protect to me from rubber.
have an anesthetic gun is right to protect to me from rubber.
>>> Having anesthetic gun is better to protect myself from robbers.
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