Have I had a conversation with a complete stranger?
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I haven\'t had a conversation with a complete stranger because I am introvert.
>> I haven\'t had a conversation with a complete stranger because I am an introvert.
I don\'t like to talk with stranger because it is very uncomfortable and awkward.
>> I don\'t like to talk with strangers because it is very uncomfortable and awkward.
Also, I am always being alert and keeping guard to the strangers because there are a lot of strange people.
>> Also, I am always being alert and keeping my guard to strangers because there are a lot of strange people
I can see scary issue on the news almost every night.
>> I can see scary issues on the news almost every night.
So, it is hard for me to make a relationship with other people.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: So, it is hard for me to make new relationships with other people.
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