Have modern advancements truly improved the quality of people's lives?

2015-10-13 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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I think that the modern advancements are not improved our lives. Yes, I agree that the modern advancements make us to get some information more easily than ever. However the development makes us more tired, and even it ruin our body. For example, the development of smart device give a lot of information to us. In other way, It gives too much choices. We spend too much time to search some information what we need. Also, every time the smart phone with our hand, even walking. It is very dangerous and ruin our body balance. So I think the modern advancements are not improved our lives.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! (^_^) A great Tuesday to you. ^^How\'s your day going so far? We use technology everyday and in different ways. Modern technology has improved communication and has provided easy access to information. It has improved housings and lifestyles and has also provided a great form of entertainment. It paved the way to social networking sites and made education very convenient. Work has become more efficient and as a result, productivity has increased. The impact of technology in our lives today is truly unmeasurable. However, it goes to say that technology also has its downfall. Robots and machines are now replacing humans, thereby contributing to unemployment rates. Modern technology has also paved the way to the creation of weapons for mass destruction. Social isolation is also increasing nowadays. We don\'t talk to each other anymore because we\'d rather use our smart phones. Lastly, human competency level is starting to go down because of our increased dependency on modern tools which reduces our creativity and intelligence. I think technology is useful but its use should be controlled. As the saying goes: Too much and too little of everything is harmful. There you have it [이름]! ^^ I hope you are having a great day today. See you again tomorrow. Take care and God bless! ~Teacher Charry (^^,) I think that the modern advancements are not improved our lives. >> I think the modern advancements have not improved our lives. Yes, I agree that the modern advancements make us to get some information more easily than ever. >> Yes, I agree that the modern advancements have enabled us to acquire information easier and faster than before. However the development makes us more tired, and even it ruin our body. >> However, the advancement makes us more tired and could even ruin our body. For example, the development of smart device give a lot of information to us. >> For example, the invention of smart devices provided us with a lot of information. In other way, It gives too much choices. >> On the other hand, these devices give us too many choices. We spend too much time to search some information what we need. >> We spend too much searching for the information we need. Also, every time the smart phone with our hand, even walking. >> In addition to that, we spend too much time using our smart phone. We even use it while walking. It is very dangerous and ruin our body balance. >> It is a very dangerous thing to do and could possibly get us into an accident. So I think the modern advancements are not improved our lives. >> These are the reasons why I think modern advancements have not improved our lives.

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