Have verb

2021-04-07 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

학생이 쓴 원문

1)I have a mother who is good cook. She has a neat and frugal personality. I have feeling for her. The people in our community have respect for my mother. 2)I have a car.it is so important to me. I got it when l had a baby. I will always use a my car no mattet what. Peoplel often tell me that l\'m lucky for haveing it.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]! Good sentences today. Keep up the good work :)
~Teacher Aki^^
I have a mother who is good cook.
>>CORRECT!
OR>> I have a mom who is talented in cooking.
She has a neat and frugal personality.
>>CORRECT!
OR >> She has an orderly and thrifty personality.
I have feeling for her.
>> I have a feeling for her.
The people in our community have respect for my mother.
>>CORRECT!\'
OR>> The people in our community have a high admiration for her.
2)I have a car.it is so important to me.
>> I have a car and it is so important for me.
I got it when l had a baby.
>>CORRECT!
OR>> I got it after giving birth.
I will always use a my car no matter what.
>> I will always use my car in any way.
People often tell me that I\'m lucky for having it.
>> People often tell me it is my lucky car.

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