Have you been on a road trip before? Why do you think driving a car is exciting?

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I have been on a road trip a couple of time when I was in America.
>>> I have been on a road trip a couple of times when I was in America.  

The first trip was when my friends and I went to Arches National Park, which is famous for giant rock that looks like a big gate with two columns and a roof between them.

>>> The first trip was when my friends and I went to Arches National Park, which is famous for their giant rock that looks like a big gate with two columns and a roof between them.
 We rented a car and hit the road to the city for the first time.
>>> Correct!

After we drove all the way to the national park and hiked to the arch rock.
>>> Correct!

At night, we took a car to the park to see the night sky with stars, and I never forget the scene at the night.
>>> One night, we took a car to the park to see the night sky with stars, and I have never forgotten the scene at that night. 

Driving in west America was pretty exciting.
>>> Correct!

Different from Seoul city, in which all we see is a pack of people and buildings, we could get a clear view of blue sky and mountains and lands without any buildings or cars that block our sight
>>> Different from Seoul city, in which all we see are groups of people and buildings, we could get a clear view of the blue sky, mountains and lands without any buildings or cars blocking our sight.

We here are likely to run into traffic jams every road in Seoul.
>>> We are likely to run into traffic jams in every road in Seoul.  

When I am stuck in endless lines of cars with noises and smog from cars, I really miss driving on empty roads around massive lands in America.

>>> Correct!