Have you crossed anything off your bucket list? How did it feel?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes,I have crossed one off my bucket list
Two years ago I went to Camino de Santiago.
There is among France and Spain.
It took 40 days and I walked around 800KM.
I felt like alive while I walking everyday.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Grace!
Wow! I\'ve always heard about walking the Camino de Santiago, and I truly admire people who take this pilgrimage. I think it is not an easy route, but from how you described it—feeling alive every day—it seems like something worth adding to one\'s bucket list!
- T. Caitlyn
Yes,I have crossed one off my bucket list
>> CORRECT
Two years ago I went to Camino de Santiago.
Two years ago I went to Camino de Santiago.
>> Two years ago, I went to the Camino de Santiago.
>> or: Two years ago, I walked the Camino de Santiago.
There is among France and Spain.
>> It is between France and Spain.
It took 40 days and I walked around 800KM.
It took 40 days and I walked around 800KM.
>> CORRECT
I felt like alive while I walking everyday.
I felt like alive while I walking everyday.
>> I felt alive while walking every day.
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