Have you ever appreciated a sunset?..etc(ANSWER)

I usually see sunset at the way to home. I never went somewhere and see sunset or sunrise. I always see sunset on he way back home, or on the way going academy. When I see sunset, I\'m always with my friends. I see sunset with my friends, and we take a picture about sunset. We talk about sunset and we say \"Good Bye.\" I want to see sunset or sunrise with my family!!

  

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HOMEWORK:

Have you ever appreciated a sunset?

Please answer in a complete sentence.

 

YOUR ANSWER:

 

I usually see sunset at the way to home.
I never went somewhere and see sunset or sunrise.
I always see sunset on he way back home, or on the way going academy.
When I see sunset, I\'m always with my friends.
I see sunset with my friends, and we take a picture about sunset.
We talk about sunset and we say \"Good Bye.\"
I want to see sunset or sunrise with my family!!

 

 

CORRECTIONS: 

 

 

I usually see a sunset on the way home, or on the way going to the academy.
I never went somewhere to see a sunset or a sunrise.
When I see a sunset, I\'m always with my friends.
I see a sunset with my friends, and we take pictures of it.
We talk about the sunset and we say \"Good Bye.\"
I want to see a sunset or a sunrise with my family!!

 

  

** Dear [이름], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. 😊 Please take note of the corrections. ^^

 Cheers!! Take care. J

 

  ---------T. Alexia----------        

 

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