Have you ever appreciated a sunset? Were you alone or with someone? Please answer in complete senten

2019-02-01 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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I never tried appreciated a sunset. really i don't need. because when i was young i go out 8 hour a day so i get many sunlight. so now my skin ton is brown.

강사 첨삭

 

Hi [이름],

  Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

Have you ever appreciated a sunset? Were you alone or with someone? Please answer in complete sentences.

 

YOUR ANSWER:

I never tried appreciated a sunset. really i don\'t need. because when i was young i go out 8 hour a day so i get many sunlight. so now my skin ton is brown.

 

CORRECTIONS:

I never tried to appreciate a sunset. Really, I don\'t need to. Because when I was young, I go out 8 hours a day so I get much sunlight. Now, my skin tone is brown.

 

SAMPLE ANSWER:

I haven’t tried to appreciate a sunset. Maybe in the future, either with my family or with friends. I can imagine it would be a great experience to remember.

 

 

** Dear [이름], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. J  However, your answer isn’t connected with the question. Probably, you misunderstood. I have a sample answer for you though. Please have a look above and please take note of the corrections. ^^

 Thank you! Cheers!!

 Take care. J

 

  ---------T. Alexia----------    

 

 

                       

           

                         

                         

           

             

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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