Have you ever appreciated a sunset? Were you alone or with someone? Please answer in complete senten
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HOMEWORK:
Have you ever appreciated a sunset? Were you alone or with someone? Please answer in complete sentences.
YOUR ANSWER:
I never tried appreciated a sunset. really i don\'t need. because when i was young i go out 8 hour a day so i get many sunlight. so now my skin ton is brown.
CORRECTIONS:
I never tried to appreciate a sunset. Really, I don\'t need to. Because when I was young, I go out 8 hours a day so I get much sunlight. Now, my skin tone is brown.
SAMPLE ANSWER:
I haven’t tried to appreciate a sunset. Maybe in the future, either with my family or with friends. I can imagine it would be a great experience to remember.
** Dear [이름], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. J However, your answer isn’t connected with the question. Probably, you misunderstood. I have a sample answer for you though. Please have a look above and please take note of the corrections. ^^
Thank you! Cheers!!
Take care. J
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