Have you ever become an athlete?

2024-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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When I was young, I was a fast runner. I liked working out, but that was all. I was not good at applied sports, such as soccer. So, I didn\'t think about wanting to be an athlete.

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Hello [이름] Ki!
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T. Aki~

When I was young, I was a fast runner.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >> I used to run fast when I was young.

I liked working out, but that was all.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> i enjoyed working out, but that was about i

I was not good at applied sports, such as soccer.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >> I wasn\'t skilled at team sports like soccer,

So, I didn\'t think about wanting to be an athlete.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >> So the idea of becoming an athlete never crossed my mind

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