Have you ever been caught in bad weather? If so, what did you do?(ANSWER)

2019-01-18 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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The weather was so great at morning, so I decided to go to an ice rink. But at lunch, the sky was full of cloud, and it began rain! So... I just stayed at home. I studied Math, and I saw my favorite TV program again. It rained all day long, so our family eat dinner at home. It was great because I ate chicken! :) (I don't like rain...)

강사 첨삭

  

Hi [이름],

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

Have you ever been caught in bad weather? If so, what did you do?

Please answer in a complete sentence.

 

YOUR ANSWER:

 

The weather was so great at morning, so I decided to go to an ice rink.
But at lunch, the sky was full of cloud, and it began rain!
So... I just stayed at home.
I studied Math, and I saw my favorite TV program again.
It rained all day long, so our family eat dinner at home.
It was great because I ate chicken! :)

(I don\'t like rain...)

 

 

CORRECTIONS: 

 

The weather was so great in the morning, so I decided to go to an ice rink.
But at lunch, the sky was full of
clouds, and it began raining!
So, I just stayed at home.
I studied Math, and I saw my favorite TV program again.
It rained all day long, so our family
ate dinner at home.
It was great because I ate chicken! :)

(I don\'t like rain...)

 

 

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** Dear [이름], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. 😊 Please take note of the corrections. ^^

 Cheers!! Take care. J

 

  ---------T. Alexia----------    

                       

           

                         

                         

           

             

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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